minicomics ??, post 18– another scribble for you

Another delayed post, this one from this afternoon.  I am writing them all day , honest I am, and posting them when I can.brontosaurus-page 5-scribble-blog

This is page 5, and we are already at the end of the first scene. (Things move fast when you only have 16 pages to work with.) I was pleased to find a way to show the sidewalk drawing relatively large for one last time without it being too horribly obvious. I like the way it “appears” with the change in point of view between panel 2 and panel 3. Plus the both panels avoid the “talking heads” phenomenon that’s so deadly to a minicomics page with a lot of dialog in it. It’s a minor victory.

And if Murphy loves to draw, he should definitely have a shoulder bag with him all the time. It probably won’t be a messenger bag as such—more like a canvas military surplus bag of some kind.

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