Hmm– everybody seems to be staring off into space here but the dog. I will absolutely fix this in the finishes, probably by redoing the steam creature’s eyes so she seems to be either conversing with the man or lecturing him. Stray lines are marked with diagonal hatching and will be deleted. No matter how careful you are, every project has enough of them that you have to wonder what happens to your brain when you pick up a pen.
This page makes it clear, if you haven’t noticed it already, that I am having way too much fun inking these rocks. We are lucky this story is a fantasy, because I do not think anyone would want to live somewhere with that kind of geology. Also, I am getting hungry enough that the picnic basket looks pretty good, in spite of the somewhat wonky inking. (I winged it with the picnic basket, and it sort of shows.)
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