Page 2. I really like the bulk of the saddle in panel 1 and how much it seems to weigh. I may bulk it up when it reappears in panel 4. I am also starting to have ideas about how to ink the page so that the door, which isn’t really any bigger than a household bathroom door, seems more impressive, or at least stranger. Or I may just make it bigger.
And don’t worry about Gideon’s sensibilities. He is just goofing around– he’s a werewolf and his sensibilities are about as delicate as a cast iron pipe. And as we already know, having read the script, Jack is good for a lot more than carrying heavy things and kissing.